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Category Archives: Writer Wednesdays
Writer Wednesdays: The First Draft
Know why it’s called a first draft? Because there should be a second, a third, however many you need to make your book perfect. So many authors seem to think once they’ve written the first draft, they’re done. I understand … Continue reading
Writer Wednesdays: Dialog tags vs. dialog beats
Don’t use dialog tags and beats together! I casually mentioned this in a previous post, and I think a lot of readers were confused. Certainly some of my writers have been! Here’s the dialog tag: “I hate you,” Joe said. … Continue reading
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Tagged action, dialog beats, dialog tags, emotion, scene building
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Writer Wednesday: Conjunctions
This is a tale of coordinating conjunctions and subordinating conjunctions. What’s the difference? Coordinating conjunctions join two independent clauses; subordinating conjunctions join an independent clause to a dependent clause. Who cares? Well, the comma does. Because the comma has to … Continue reading
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Tagged after, although, and, because, before, but, coordinating conjunction, even if (or though), fanboys, for, if, nor, once, or, rather than, since, so, subordinating conjunction, then, though, till, unless, until, when, where, while, yet
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Writer Wednesdays: Telling detail
Details are awesome. Fancy writing there, huh? But they are. They do so much in your writing. They are the paint we use to create a picture in a reader’s mind. Words don’t stay individual words when we read. They … Continue reading
Writer Wednesday: Apostrophe s
Is there anything more annoying than the -‘s? (Well, other than tornadoes.) When do you use -‘s and when do you use -ies? Even worse, what about -ies’? It all comes down to possessive or plural. –If something is being … Continue reading
Writer Wednesdays: $10 words and $1 words
I learned this phrase when I was working in journalism, editing a monthly magazine: “Don’t use a $10 word when a $1 word will do.” What does that mean? Simple: don’t say “azure” when you mean “blue.” Never say “azure”? … Continue reading
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Tagged aquamarine, azure. Or beryl, cerulean, chappy, cobalt, Faulkner, Hemingway, indigo, masticates, navy, pedantic, pompous, readers, sapphire, teal, turquoise, vocabularies
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Writer Wednesdays: Don’t Overexplain
One issue a lot of writers seem to have is overexplaining. They describe a situation, they describe the character’s expression, they tell us what the character says … and then they tell us why the character has that expression and … Continue reading
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Tagged adverb, agent, character, dialog, editor, expression, publisher, reader, verb, writer
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Writer Wednesdays: The Oxford Comma
The Oxford comma is when you use a comma between the last item and the word “and” in a list — I like chicken, rice, and beans. Here’s why I like the Oxford comma: I can’t tell you how many … Continue reading
Writer Wednesdays: Take criticism like a man
The worst part of writing is by far the criticism. It hurts so bad hearing someone talk trash on your baby, your blood, sweat, and tears. But if you can’t take criticism, honestly, you’ll never be a good writer. And … Continue reading
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Tagged constructive criticism, criticism, rewrite, self-published, writing
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Writer Wednesdays: Adjective types
Have you ever noticed that sometimes you use commas in a list of modifiers, and sometimes you don’t? “The big black car turned the corner.” “The shiny, bright car turned the corner.” So why is that? Because adjectives have an … Continue reading
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Tagged adjective order, adjectives, age, color, origin, quality, quantity, size, type
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