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Writer Wednesdays: What do people have against long sentences?
If you read marketing copy, you will see a lot of short sentence fragments. “It’s the best thing since sliced bread. Low priced and cheap to run. Looks good on your counter. And it’s free!” But we novelists aren’t supposed … Continue reading
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Tagged fog index, gerund phrase, long sentences, present participle phrase, short sentences
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